I like the simple nature of your business card and it's also coming through here on the front of the handout. As I mentioned in critique, the lines are a little too long to read and there is also a LOT of content, if any of that can be cut, you might want to just to keep your reader engaged. Other than that though, I like the hand-printed feel your designs have and I love your illustration on the cover. Good job, hope the T-shirts work out!
I like the simple nature of your business card and it's also coming through here on the front of the handout. As I mentioned in critique, the lines are a little too long to read and there is also a LOT of content, if any of that can be cut, you might want to just to keep your reader engaged. Other than that though, I like the hand-printed feel your designs have and I love your illustration on the cover. Good job, hope the T-shirts work out!
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